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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Joe on 2015-02-18, 19:50

    I dont have time to compete in such low competitions. I'll use my time wisely and compete in the bigger competitions.

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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Rand al'Thor on 2015-02-18, 21:57

    I vote for Warriors.
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    Post by Nr on 2015-02-18, 22:17

    Rand al'Thor wrote:I vote for Warriors.

    On time. 3 minutes till deadline at the time of the post. Wink

    Okay, the public vote was a tie. Both Feuer and Lord Abigor got 2 votes, therefore they will split the 10m. 5m has been sent to each of their credit accounts on the IRC!

    Round 3 - Topic Released


    Topic: The story must contain a chess analogy that has significance in or applies to the story.
    Genre: Any.

    This round you've got to please pants the most out of the judges. You've got free reign over whatever you write about, but a chess analogy needs to have an important place in the story.

    Bear in mind: Unlike the last two rounds, this round is not contained to Cora Dyce. Write about anything and anyone you want to write about.

    * You have 5 days to submit your entry. The deadline is Monday the 23rd 21:00 GMT.
    * Your entry should average around 500 words. Less than that? No problem. Triple that? Too much.
    * To submit your entry forum PM me it.
    * If you've already submitted, you can still update your entry by re-sending it before the deadline.


    Round 2 - Grading Process


    Topic: You log in to Cora Dyce and the place looks nothing like it did yesterday. What happened?
    Genre: Mystery, Any.

    Extra topic description was:
    The goal for round 2 is to come up with a cracking short story mystery. You log on to Cora Dyce the place looks nothing like it did yesterday. What and why? Does everything suddenly look like it did in 2012? Did you imagine everything that had happened meanwhile or is time travel in play? There are plenty of scenarios to think of.

    The main genre is mystery, but there are still multiple ways to handle the story. Science-fiction, comedy etc.? Your call. This is a great round to challenge your writing. Get creative!

    * You have 5 days to submit your entry. The deadline is Wednesday the 18th 21:00 GMT.
    * Your entry should average around 500 words. Less than that? No problem. Triple that? Too much.
    * To submit your entry forum PM me it.
    * If you've already submitted, you can still update your entry by re-sending it before the deadline

    A public vote will run until the deadline for round 3 is reached. You can vote by commenting on the thread.

    * Feel free to comment on all scripts when voting, but certainly pick one best that you'd like to see win 10m and the public vote. That vote will be the one counted. You cannot vote for yourself.

    Round 2 Entries

    There were a total of 8 entries.

    Iamtaba wrote:After seeing more of zodz' mishandled disputes, I decided to call it a night. In my dreams I saw Zodz finally owning the entirety of Cora Dyce, so it's something close to my worst nightmare actually. Anyways, after I ate breakfast, got dressed and all, I decided to check what's new on Cora Dyce. I nearly went into shock seeing the disgusting minecraft-esque background, and the fact that several sections disappeared (including the spam), several members got banned, and Andy's name was no longer in green just scared the shit at me. At first, I thought that this was obviously the work of Zodz, but why would Andy just give zodz the ownership? CD is still going *somewhat* strong, and he's not inactive enough to not see the several anti-zodz threads. However, I was in for a bigger surprise when Zodz was deranked as well. Inva too. Basically all ranks were deranked, and some were even banned. After looking through the host usergroup, I found out the culprit behind this.
    Joe.
    Mother. Fucking. JOE.
    I then saw one post was made in "give aways" by Joe. The topic was "Hey", here's the OG post:
    "Hey everyone who I haven't banned yet Smile! Sorry, but a few users were really starting to get on my nerve hehe xD so I decided to take a bit of action. After sucking Zodz' dick for a few hours on end, who btw is extremely bribable and is probably the reason why he mishandles disputes so much, I asked him if I could have Minecraft mods, which he gave me. Long story short, Andy screwed up once again and these minecraft mods led me to become owner. Have fun guys, you're in Joe Dyce now. Smile"

    Fuck this shit, I'm out.

    I whistled for a cab, and when it came near, the license plate said “fresh” and there were dice in the mirror. If anything I could say that this cab was rare, but I thought “naw forget it, yo home to bel-air!” I pulled up to the house about seven or eight and I yelled to the cabbie “yo homes smell ya later!” Looked at my kingdom, I was finally there. To settle my throne as the prince of bel-air.

    Slash wrote:I logged into Cora Dyce, and the place felt really odd. There was  nothing unusual, nothing out of place, but something  just felt different. I was getting these positive vibes, that things would be different today. The future for Cora was looking up.
    So I continued my daily forum routine, checking out the introductions section first, followed by the general/off-topic section and then finally the host section.  To my suprise, there were at least 10+ resignation threads. Chess, KSHMR, Asar, Phat, General_List, even INVA! At the bottom of all these threads there was one that surprised me so hard, that I ended up with not one, not two, but THREE hershey kisses in my underwear.

    After all this time, after all of the threads made by him, no one took him seriously. He was serious about leaving (http://www.coradyce.com/t35931-leaving-coradyce), about bringing a change to Cora Dyce (http://www.coradyce.com/t36304-i-give-up), about his LAST ideas ever (http://www.coradyce.com/t36735-last-idea-for-coradyce-from-me) and  now  this...:
    Buying out Cora Dyce: http://www.coradyce.com/t37126-for-how-much-can-i-buy-coradyce
    My positive vibes, all gone. Shattered by this single thread. I log into world 3 spirit tree to see if it was true, was this really the end of Cora Dyce? I got my answer, the place was crowded, our home spot was now surrounded by clan banners and members dressed in red chanting: LTU DYCE. The IRC taken over as well, with bots called "LTUGAMES" and "LTUDYCEBOT". I didn't know what to do, most of the ranks had left and were replaced by LTU's closest friends: medin, HostDas, medic and a few others. No one even knew how LTU had such amounts of cash. More ranks posted their resignation threads, scammers like Baws and Casb had gotten kb'ed. Zodz had gotten de-admined. 'WAIT WHAT?' I thought to myself.  'ZODZ DE-ADMINED?'  My mood had suddenly changed by 360 degrees once again. I was full of joy and excitement, Zodz's derank was probably the best thing to happen to Cora Dyce.  No wonder our home spot was so crowded, no wonder everyone was so happy! I quickly told all of the ranks who posted their resignation threads, and they IMMEDIATELY deleted them before LTU would notice. We were all excited as hell. The bets were rolling in, and we were getting transactions every 5 minutes! It was crazy, we hadn't seen Cora Dyce like this since 2012 (pre-eoc)!  Soon the forums moved over to the website betting we had discussed. Everything was working out well. The ranks and I joined the party in world 3 spirit tree, and chanted along: "LTU DYCE! LTU DYCE! LTU DYCE!...."
    After the party died down, most of the bettors and looters had logged out. The hosts and LTU remained at the spirit tree and discussed how well it had all turned out. LTU kept getting compliments about what he had done, and everyone thanked him so much for it. Just as we were about to log off, Chess asked him a question "LTU, how exactly did you get your hands on 100B of 07?"
    "Remember Andy?" He asked.
    "Yeeaah..?" We all replied
    LTU slowly jerked his head back and looked up to the branches of the Spirit Tree. A small smirk came across his face as he said "He is my son."
    We all stood there stunned with our jaws dropped to the floor, as LTU logged out.

    Eth111 wrote:
    If only...


    The day starts out normal for Eth111, as he wakes up, gets a drink of water, has a quick breakfast, then logs on to the computer. He first goes to the forum to check on posts. When he goes on the forum, something's a bit odd... The forum is clean of all Zodz hate, flaming toward members, and the Welcome/Farewell Section is full of joining back theeads. "What's going on here..?" said Eth111, outloud. He then goes to the irc to ask questions about the forum when he also has another shock.. they're over 100 people betting on the irc! Also, strangly, there is no sight of Zodz or Andy (not that odd due to Andy not being there 75% of time anyways) anywhere! Eth111 tries to get an explination out of the members, but the channel is filled with spam! He resorts to pm, first pming LMS, asking whats going on. LMS then said "Haven't you heard the great news?" While LMS is typing the next line, Eth111 accidently "X'ed" out his browser, logs back on into the IRC, and unfortunatly, LMS had logged off. He then pms VP0, who is just as confused as I am, exclaiming that Joe had been IP banned from the IRC and the forum. Now with Eth111, being more confused than before, resorts to pming Iamtaba, who tells him the following: "Andy wen't bankrupt and had to sell CoraDyce, luckily, Nr had bought it." The end.

    Dump me wrote:Many years ago, Cora Dyce has found a way to keep their Friend chat running and stay very active. On the day gambling was forbidden in Runescape, many people have lost their ways but have stumbled upon Cora Dyce's new way to gamble called IRC. Games like 58x2, dice dual, and blackjack rise to the equation and gave the players the opportunity to keep gambling. As the years gone by, the IRC slowly evolved and changed into something better, something more effective to the players. The day i logged in after work has blown my mind, i didn't know if this was supposed to attract people from playing or if someone surprisingly hacked in and put it there. Who could have done this to the IRC? What was their intention on creating this?
    What i saw looked advanced. It was like a virtual simulation, being in a mixed stripper club/dicing IRC where there were strippers everywhere! Compared to GTA5, you were able to look around and make it raaaiiiin with credits. Everyone was scattered across the room. I looked at the chat and it seems like many people were enjoying their time with this new IRC. I got caught into the fact of how the game has changed so much and how someone could have changed it in one day. Was it one of the host or some random hacker?

    Rock wrote:
    The Spirit of Cora


             Chapter 1: Zaratros

    Where… am I? I said as I have just woken up from what seemed to be a nightmare. I walk around to what seems to be my room. Then suddenly, a mystical white ghost with blazing blue eyes appeared before me. It said to me: “Welcome to the world of Zaratros, I am Anelia; The Forgotten.” I asked Anelia “What? Zaratros? What is this place? Am I on Earth?” She responded saying that I was no longer on Earth and that Earth has been destroyed by Kylios; The Raging Dragon. “This place.... why is it so familiar to Earth? Everything seems the same to me.” I said. “This is a parallel dimension to Earth, We have transported as many people as we could. We could also not stop the revival of Kylios, he is much too powerful for us and there were already many casualties of trying to rescue you humans. I heard you speaking something about ‘Cora’ before, that place is long gone, so is a lot other things. I shall tell you a bit about ‘Cora’”.

    Chapter 2: Cora

    “Cora. He was a man long before a ‘place’. He was born and raised by Zara who was his father, and Tros who was his mother. When growing up, Cora found how corrupt this world is so he decided to learn magic. As years went by he became a Sorcerer’s Apprentice and that was as far as he could go. One day Cora saw a spell in his book about creating another dimension. That dimension is Zaratros, named after his mother and father whom he deeply loved. He saw an envision in the future that Kylios would one day be revived and destroy Earth. So that is why he created Zaratros. Cora then decided to turn himself into a place where everyone can be protected from evil. That is how Cora Dyce orignated. In Cora Dyce, there were only people with pure hearts that lived here, if you had the slightest of evilness you would be kicked out immediately. Although, there were some ways around Cora’s magic to make it seem like you were pure hearted. One day, a group of sorcerers who seemed “Pure Hearted” decided to create magic to revive Kylios. The leader of the group was Enva, who was known to be a mage with the power of a Wizards Eye, the highest name you can get for a mage.”

    Chapter 3: The Revival of Kylios

    “Enva, who was known to have equal power to a Wizards Eye managed to revive Kylios but the thing they couldn’t do was control Kylios. All of the sorcerers that helped revive Kylios were slained except for Enva. Enva  knew he could not control it so he fled from the scene with major injuries on him. Cora, still turned into a place turned back into human form and slayed off Enva as he saw this as the only chance while Enva was weakened.  The big problem now though, was that Kylios was on a rampage destroying everything in its ways. Cora called upon his people at Zaratros to come here and transport everyone back there as he knew Earth was at it’s end. Many of Cora’s people were killed in the process when being transported and that is when Cora got mad and went straight for the kill of Kylios.”

    Chapter 4: The Death of Cora

    “Cora tried to fight Kylios but he was much too powerful. Cora lasted a long time against Kylios but then was no match and was killed by him. When Cora died, the rest of Cora Dyce on Zaratros disappeared as well. The only thing that managed to survive was Zaratros itself. It was astounding of how Zaratros survived as we all feared the magic that created this dimension would fade as soon as the creator died.  Zaratros survived as it was not only Cora who created this dimension, it was also the spirit’s of Cora’s parents who helped create it. We are not sure when we will ever be able to go back to Earth as Kylios burned everything down. Anyways, that is the story of Cora for you.”

    Luke wrote:Week leading up;
    Someone once asked Inva about Coradyce, and the best sentence he could use to sum up his feelings about the clan. He decided upon saying this; there is much to see in the window but there is nothing actually in the room. You might ask, what does this mean? Well that’s easy, there is always so many good ideas for the future of the clan. But, these ideas are never implemented or implemented correctly. That has been the history of the clan and while looking at host section this seems like it will ever to change.
    The actual day;
    During the stages of September 2014, I had given up on looking at the host section when I first woke up. When I first received my perm rank, it would be the first thing that I would do once I had woke. But after you realise the lack of anything happening or people trying to improve the clan that same nostalgia and anticipated cease to exist. Some of this was caused by the ranks, who seemingly couldn’t give two shits about the clan and were only here for dollar signs. But, most of the credit has to go to the two dictating couple of the clan Andy and Zodz.
    But surprisingly, the couple had decided to do something, they had decided to finally create the new forums. After the three to four year wait, they had been implemented! It must have taken some serious negotiating for Andy to convince Zodz that adding a black market to the forums was needed. Zodz did well though, he realised that adding a black market isn’t a big deal considering gambling was already against the rules.
    With the creation of the new forums, some new members actually came to the clan in which lead Cora dyce to regain the sorts of community that was dreamt about every night for an extended period of time by a lot of the older members. It was so strange to log onto the Irc during the Australian time zone and not see a gap of 45 minutes in between messages because Pant’s bot had disconnected. It was definitely a sight for sore eyes, to say the least.
    With Cora once again obtaining a community Andy had decided that it was a great idea to implement plans to keep the community and not let it deteriorate into nothing, like it had before. Most surprised member out of all of this had definitely been Phat4tw, he kept reminding Inva every night of Skype how Cora wasn’t going anywhere and how had he stayed in the clan for over a year.

    p.s; wrote in 14 minutes and 32 seconds. 2 ez (ye I actually timed myself) I went there..

    Lord Abigor wrote:"You get high cards, all cards go low on table. You get low, all cards go high.". Thats what LTU said when hes raging and decided to quit coradyce. Many of the members ignore him. BUT!, Zodz just made a drama and declared a war against LTU. On another LTU post, he just cursing Zodz with full of his energy. They started being a keyboard warrior on that post. No one dares to reply to these keyboard warrior "conversation". Their drama thread just made a new coradyce record with with a total of 6901 page and 123189421 words in just one day. Andy locked the thread once but zodz unlocked it back and love being a keyboard warrior. On the next day, when i woke up, i just ran to my laptop and open the coradyce website. I was looking for the thread of their "war" but... what i found out is LTU is a new admin of coradyce and Zodz is the owner of Coradyce.


    WHAT HAPPENED?

    Taro Beast wrote:Logging into Cora Dyce was always a highlight of my day and something that filled me with anticipation and excitement as I prepared to read the new hilarious topics on the forums whilst gambling and socialising with the other members on the clans IRC. The page was open as always, a permanent tab on my web browser. But as I clicked over to the forums an icy cold shiver coursed through my body as complete confusion and horror filled the normal happiness I felt on my daily visit.
    Something wasn’t right. Nothing at Cora made sense. The site was still bustling with life but the atmosphere had changed. It felt dirty, contaminated. There was a different sense of addiction filling the air. Gone was the familiarity of new ridiculous spam topics and debates replaced by all of the users making much less comical comments or uploading unique pictures and videos. Adverts littered the page, offering extraordinary ways of ‘growing my penis up to 6 inches bigger instantly’ and ‘find a gran to shag in 10 minutes’. Although tempting, this didn’t feel like the normal Cora.
    But how could it have changed so much? I had only been on here yesterday. Nothing had seemed out of place then. It was as if all of my memories of Cora had been a dream. Nothing but a lie. What was set out before me was in stark contrast to everything I remembered. Was that all it had been? A dream? How could I have been so wrong? So many questions, but no answers. A hollowness filled me, as though my whole life had lost all meaning.
    But there was something else. Something that didn’t fit. None of the users seemed familiar. Names that I remember being a constant presence in the forums like ‘Nr’, ‘Zodz’ and the humorous ‘Allen1’ were replaced with the more vulgar ‘ExtraBigDik’ and ‘Creampies4days’. I was left in complete bewilderment as to where the moderators had gone to let new members not only select such rude names but make posts that I would find myself staring at for hours in complete awe and often disgust.
    But everything suddenly clicked. The sudden realisation hit me like a blow to the face. Every comment filled with perversion. The unusual usernames and the repetition of words such as ‘fapping’. It all made sense now. I checked my browser to make sure, and it removed all doubt. There was only one thing that could have caused Cora to change so much overnight.

    I had logged into my PornHub account not Cora Dyce.

    Have fun reading the entries. Don't forget to throw in a public vote and the topic for round 3 has been announced as well! Judge votes for round 2 entries should be up soon.
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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Joe on 2015-02-18, 22:38

    why is your son insulting me?

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    Post by Dump me on 2015-02-18, 23:05

    i dont think i did well on this one
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    Post by Allen1 on 2015-02-19, 00:13

    tfw you haven't gotten tail for so long and your pubes are starting to look like afro
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    Post by Joe on 2015-02-19, 01:24

    Allen1 wrote:tfw you haven't gotten tail for so long and your pubes are starting to look like afro

    funny m8
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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Allen1 on 2015-02-19, 03:02

    i think rock wins automatically for making names like Zaratros and kylios up lmfao.

    Zaratros sounds like a taco shop across the street.
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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Dogs>Cats on 2015-02-19, 03:32

    most followed the basic plot of cora dyce got better,
     
    Taba- I liked the twist. There wasn’t much plot though. I can summarize the entire thing as andy and zodz messed up, joe became owner who would then proceed to do ban ppl he didn’t like.
     
    Slash – I liked most of it, besides the very end.
     
    Eth- better than tabas, but still a very mediocre plot
     
    Dump me-somehow managed to get less plot than taba
     
    Rock- I didn’t really like this story because of personal preference, but in literary terms it was a complete story.
     
    Luke- I liked the story, but u spelled my name wrong psh pant’s its pants’s derp.
     
     
    Lord abigor- idk why but I liked, but still very bare.
     
     Taro- didn’t really follow the topic.
    8 Rock
    7 Luke
    6 Slash
    5 Eth
    4 Lord abigor
    3 Iamtaba
    2 Dump me
    1 Taro


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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by The Uzumaki on 2015-02-19, 05:35

    lordabigor hits me so hard evry fooken time
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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Iamtaba on 2015-02-19, 06:32

    wait did taro get lower than me or higher
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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Slash on 2015-02-19, 07:34

    Lol Taro, laughed my ass off tbh.

    And +points for originality.

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    Post by Slash on 2015-02-19, 07:38

    LOOOL LORD ABIGOR

    AND ROCK WHAT THE HELL LOL.<3


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    Post by Taro beast on 2015-02-19, 09:02

    Dayum last place. Thanks slash Razz counting on you now Razz

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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Taro beast on 2015-02-19, 09:22

    Dogs>Cats wrote:
     
     Taro- didn’t really follow the topic.

    Who the hell manages to follow a mystery until the very final 2 minutes when they explain how easy everything was? I followed that by making it confusing and then BAM I told you everything.

    Genius.

    (p.s. leaving a double space before my name in the rankings was brutal...really showed how far behind I was Wink
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    Post by Slash on 2015-02-19, 14:57

    Dogs>Cats wrote:
     
    Slash – I liked most of it, besides the very end.
     

    THAT WAS THE BEST PART LOL.

    Fine. may have seemed stupid but i needed a nice ending so i took a risk



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    Post by Iamtaba on 2015-02-19, 15:35

    yo shit you have 10245 posts lol
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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Nr on 2015-02-19, 17:30

    Joe wrote:why is your son insulting me?

    Rebel phase. I lent him lunch money a month ago. He used it on pokemon, bitches, and weed and still hasn't paid it all back.

    Slash wrote:
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    Slash – I liked most of it, besides the very end.
     

    THAT WAS THE BEST PART LOL.

    Fine. may have seemed stupid but i needed a nice ending so i took a risk


    I didn't mind your ending.

    Votes with commentary for round 2. Bear in mind that that this is all just my opinion and not a prophecy waiting to be carved into rocks.

    A lot of generic entries following a very similar pattern and choice of topic. Kind of disappointing considering the wide number of possibilities that came with the topic. Last round had 8 entries too, but felt stronger in almost all regards.

    1 point - Rock - Well written, if not slightly convoluted, but... NR ANALOGY TIME. No matter how big your pumpkin is you can't take it to a biggest watermelon contest and expect to win. You completely ignored the concept of Cora Dyce, therefore ignoring the topic and built a meta-physical universe of sorts instead. Doing that... you ended up growing a pumpkin, while your competition grew watermelons. Small, big or disfigured, they were still actual watermelons in my eyes.

    2 points - Lord Abigor - This makes no sense and the grammar and typos are really distracting. Every plot point is random and ridicilous without any explanation. Nice comic sans, though.

    3 points - Dump me - The twist is too whack for me and the twist was the only thing that stood out in an otherwise thin on plot entry. The ending question is also strange. One host can't change everything, they don't have the power nor the expertise, really. No reason for a random hacker to turn Cora into an advanced virtual strip club, either... you could maybe think of one, but that should have been in the story then with finding a different way  to put mystery into the story. Didn't do the trick for me, sorry.

    4 points - Iamtaba - This was going decently and I even enjoyed the Joe reveal. Everything after that bombed completely and just turned into a "fuck Zodz" story with a turn on the same ending gag you used last round, which didn't succeed with you in it. Neeeehhhh.

    5 points - Luke - Not feeling the mystery in this entry, nor suspense or anything that's really interesting here. It's just... empty and the catalyst of events is lackluster. I can't necessarily bring out a lot of flaws, but the entry was a boring read.

    6 points - Eth111 - While the implausibility worked for your last round entry, imo it damaged this one. It just didn't have that big comedy feeling. "Have you heard the great news?" turning into a "Joe got IP banned" and then to the actual big reveal was good stuff in the middle, but both the story and the twist were just too thin and boring for it to work.

    7 points - Slash - You possibly chose the most generic and repetitive direction of all. It's a rehash of what you've written for the other 2 rounds (including the first round in the previous prose comp that failed at the second round) You keep writing about Zodz and LTU where all the stories end with Zodz losing the throne which follows in an implausible boost to the clan and it's all too similar. The picture was hilarious and the best part. The rest of the story was hit and miss, but at least semi-entertaining. I don't really feel like this should get 7 points for the lack of creativity, but as with the rest of the entries above, the ones before it were even more subpar for me.

    8 points - Taro Beast - Lol, this would be a hilarious derp moment. I didn't like the line: "I was left in complete bewilderment as to where the moderators had gone to let new members not only select just rude names but make posts that I would find myself staring at for hours in complete awe and often disgust." At that point in the story, it's cheap misdirection that goes against previous information and simply doesn't click after the twist is revealed. As out there the final twist is, this could in a slightly different sense be kind of plausible, especially when under the influence. You captured the mystery and went for something unique which others didn't. Extra shoutout for the "a different sense of addiction" and "finding a gran to shag in 10 minutes tempting" lines. Good work, I liked it.
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    Post by FeuerKaiser|Warriors on 2015-02-19, 17:48

    LOL @ SLASH'S PICTURE HAHHAHAH
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    Post by Zodz on 2015-02-19, 18:35

    wtf... why did only 2 people write about zodz this time


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    Re: Cora Prose Competition II - Community Event - Competition Thread

    Post by Joe on 2015-02-19, 18:47

    Zodz wrote:wtf... why did only 2 people write about zodz this time


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    i thought the entries would be tl;dr?
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    Post by Slash on 2015-02-19, 21:51

    u know the judges are off when one votes rock 8 and other votes rock 1


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    Post by Taro beast on 2015-02-19, 21:51

    I got 1 and 8 too Razz
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    Post by [Eth111] on 2015-02-20, 00:59

    Slash i am youre ruler now made me laugh 2 mins str8

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